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DO AUGUST 7, 2008 | , 2:17 nachmittags
New poems
I'm Sorry
when i look you in the eyes you look straight through me
when i hold my arms out to hug you you just walk away
when you fight with the only person that cares about me you cause my heart to bleed
why dont you love me
why cant you be proud of me
why cant you say you love me
now its too late
ive found her
the one who cares for me
shes going to heal my broken heart
shes going to love me for me
she wants to be with me
she doesnt care about my past
she doesnt care about the lies i told
she loves me for me
more than you ever will
so now as i walk away from you forever
i hope you realize the mistakes you made with me
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Kommentare for this Blog post
This one is kinda dark err not kinda it is dark
Vampires
as i walk this earth
look at what its become
my kind is scarce
we are growing in numbers
soon we will rule this world
soon you will fear us
soon we will own you
soon we will kill you
so run and hide
go if you must
but where ever you go you will be found
and you'll die like the rest
so come to me
and accept the inevitable
become one or die like the rest
soon darkness will take over
accept my gift
live in the night
feed on these insects
show them what real pain is
show them the darkness in your eyes
wipe the blood off of your face
and get ready to taste the next victim
Nightmares
life is a nightmare
we try and wake up
but it engulfs us
just as before
your worst fear
brought to life
try and run
just like the rest
you won't get far
until it pulls you
back in just like before
in the dark
forever i wait
in the depths of this prison
you cast aside my feelings
like they were nothing
my still beating heart
now scarred and bleeding
i tried to scream
nothing but silence
as i struggled to breathe
i thought i lost it
the hope you gave me
but in this darkness
the light still shines
but until then
in this prison i wait
your words
im tired of your s***
im tired of you putting me down
why must you keep me depressed
i tremble when i see you
i tremble when i hear your voice
i stand up to you
with fire in my eyes
and hate in my heart
you scream at me
you tell me im wrong
but what you dont know
is the scars you leave behind
with every word you say to me
it cuts me deep down
but guess what
im still here
and i remain standing
your words may hurt
and cut me deep
but my soul is still there
forever strong
broken soul
stare into my eyes
and tell me what you see
is it fear that dwells within them
why do you look away
does the fire within them hurt
when i look at you
i see your soul
the scars and bruises you hold close
all you ever knew
stand back and watch
as i heal your broken heart
I LIKE!
I really enjoy reading your poetry, it paints a vivid picture in such detail. You speak of hurt, pain and emotional wounds, in such depth that only a wounded soul can truley understand. It is my absolute pleasure to leave this comment to you. You are a great poet!! HOPE TO READ MORE SOON......
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In a real dark night of the soul,Its always three o'clock in the morning,day after day
F. Scott Fitzgerald
you say you know what pain is
you say you know what pain is
you cut your wrists
starving for attention
you hide in your room
living in darkness
growing more depressed
as your sanity
slowly fades away
telling friends you won't be here much longer
as life speeds up
your pain still remains
thats amazing.
pretty deep. i really like it. anyone who makes you feel that way is definitely someone special. keep it and don't let it go.
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~carrie~
good!
that was really good. So have you wrote any others recently?how have you been lately?
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sincerely,
the only one that knows...and will ever know
here's my myspace url
myspace.com/kurtsproperty
so look me up!
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I'm not like them but I can pretend
wow...
that sounds like it should be a song... nice... very nice... post some more soon. cant wait to read more. ♥
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~carrie~
Re: wow...
These are really good poems... They're brooding, it's painful to read.
Nice job... Very nice..
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You don't know me at all.