A Song I Wrote...Please Visit? :)

A Song I Wrote...Please Visit? :)

Hey guys, I was stuck at home with nothin' to do the other day a few months ago. And I wrote this song. I'm a little nervous about posting it, but, if you will, can I have a few honest opinions on it? I call it: "Let Me Care About You". It's supposed to be a Christian song, like, God talking to you. But, for those who aren't comfortable with that, it also means what I'd do for anyone who needed me. Sorry about the sappy summary. xD Please, enjoy? Laughing out loud

I see you standing there,
All broken down and tearful.
As for your soul, there is no where,
And of that I am fearful.

You say you’re lost,
That no one cares.
I say I found you,
Because I’m the one who cares.

(Chorus)
Let me care about you.
I’ll never let you down or forsake you.
Let me care about you.
I’ll never let you burn.
Let me care about you.
You are my sheep,
And it is my job to love you to the end.
(End Chorus)

You smile,
Small tears in your eyes.
You want to believe me,
To trust me.
But so many before,
Have seen you broken and torn.
You don’t want to give in.

(Chorus)
Let me care about you.
I’ll never let you down or forsake you.
Let me care about you.
I’ll never let you burn.
Let me care about you.
You are my sheep,
And it is my job to love you to the end.
(End Chorus)

Please,
Take my hand!
I know where you are now,
But I can teach you to stand!

Please don’t give up,
Please don’t stand down!
This is your life!
You deserve to be proud!

(Chorus)
Let me care about you.
I’ll never let you down or forsake you.
Let me care about you.
I’ll never let you burn.
Let me care about you.
You are my sheep,
And it is my job to love you to the end.
(End Chorus)

It is my job to love you to the end.
I will love you to the end.
Just take my hand,
Trust in me,
And you will see,
Not everyone is what they seem.

Let me care about you.
I will love you to your end.
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There it is! Thanks again, guys! Laughing out loud

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@malimimi15 and @Dmonheart Thanks guys! I really appreciate the kind words. Smiling

IKR?! its just that good!

okkk i know i say i love like evrey song i read here they or good ..but WOW im acctually rereading it

@TDG1992 Thank you! Laughing out loud I really appreciate it. Smiling

amazing

@Dmonheart Ok! Smiling I will! Laughing out loud In a little bit, I'll post another. Smiling thank you! (yey! Laughing out loud)

YES! you should post more... ur really good at song writing ( and it made my day that you said I made urs Smiling )

@Skyla Christine Dawn Ok! Laughing out loud Thanks for the support! I'll add more in the future. After this one's been here for a little bit. Sticking out tongue Smiling

Ur welcome Smiling and u should definitely post more!!

Ur welcome Smiling and u should definitely post more!!

@Dmonheart Yeah...but I've written a lot of songs. I could post more...if it would be ok? I am really excited about your review, though! It definitely made my day! THANK YOU!!!!! Laughing out loud :D Laughing out loud :D Laughing out loud :D Laughing out loud

@Skyla Christine Dawn Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Laughing out loud

AMAZING!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!

AMAZING!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!

I. LOVE. IT.
is this the first one you've posted on this site? cuz its amazing!