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Song written by me
I had the urge to write a song one day. This song talks about the situation in which you work so hard to get something, and in the end, you're betrayed and everything is taken from you, and society can't see your pain because they see the whole thing positively. This song is called LOST HOPE...
LOST HOPE
Given up my time,
I only seem to fail
Compassion's all we know
Repay me with betrayal
Don't you think it's time
That I stopped waiting my turn
Don't you know it's right
To give me what I so deserve?
CHORUS: (You left me with this lost hope
I'm just another dead soul
Isolated, Irritated, Frustrated
Just you name it
Destroy me in the shadows...
LOST HOPE!!!)
You never cared about me
And let me tell you why
If you said you loved me
It all would be a lie
All these little hypocrites
that you call your friends;
I refuse to be a part of it
And I won't pretend.
Don't you think it's time
That this $*** is over
Don't you know what' s right
Didn't think you could sink lower
(Chorus)
All I worked for...
You threw away in half a day
And all I loved for...
I swear to God I'll make you pay!!!
Don't you think it's time...
Don't you know it's right...
(Chorus) X2
LOST HOPE!







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Good to see that order has been restored to this forum.
@admc and iluvgoneforever- couldn't agree more...
I see all of these great people giving me positive feedback on my song. I also see one spineless member who goes by the username "dabulls" who is clearly on this site to get under people's skin. Dabulls; you've insulted my hard work, as well as several intelligent TDG fans, and you've crammed up the forums with your CRAP, and NO ONE agrees with anything that you say. You can tell people to "go and get a life," you can throw out as many innapropriate homosexual insults as you want, but the only thing that you're proving to everyone on this site is that you clearly demonstrate the characteristics of a third grade drop-out with the I.Q. of a shoe size. And that's the hella truth!
@ dabulls- us? I dunno about you but i use this as a place where people understand me and even if you dont like the song you couldve said somethiing more constructive to help fix whatever you thought was bad. I may be a kid but just saying "these lyrics are weak" is kinda mean. Now, you can say whatever you feel about this post but dont criticize greatness. If you posted a song and everyon hated how would you feel?
@ dabulls- us? I dunno about you but i use this as a place where people understand me and even if you dont like the song you couldve said somethiing more constructive to help fix whatever you thought was bad. I may be a kid but just saying "these lyrics are weak" is kinda mean. Now, you can say whatever you feel about this post but dont criticize greatness. If you posted a song and everyon hated how would you feel?
you guys need to hella settle down...
you guys need to hella settle down...
@ dabulls-maybe you need to get a life sitting on the computer CRITICIZING other people? REALLY?
thats pretty low
@ Dmonheart-im with you these lyrics are amazing!!!!
@ dabulls-maybe you need to get a life sitting on the computer CRITICIZING other people? REALLY?
thats pretty low
@ Dmonheart-im with you these lyrics are amazing!!!!
@ dabulls-maybe you need to get a life sitting on the computer CRITICIZING other people? REALLY?
thats pretty low
@ Dmonheart-im with you these lyrics are amazing!!!!
Awesome!
@admc- I couldn't agree more
Dmonheart: Thank you for defending my song. I gotta lot of respect for you.
As far as you go, dabulls, you have your opinion and you are entitled to it. I have no problem with that. However, that fact that you come onto this forum to disrespect my hard work is rude. I'm not going to get into an online verbal war with you, but I am going to say this: No one likes a jackass.
shut the hell up dabulls... people on here are supposed to be supportive, and its not my fault if you have a proble with it
go get a life dmonheart...these lyrics are hella weak.
@dabulls-no I'm not kidding, I actually like it, and u should too
hahahaha, your hella kidding right???
Hell ya thats amazin!
wow... like dude... totally awesome... i'm a song writer myself.... my insperation can come up from anywhere.... even suicide notes!... well the ones that i write.... and i really do do the s*** i say i'm gunna do in my suicide notes so like yeah... i've been to the hospital so many times... and.... it's really hard at times... it's like the world only cares once you're dead.... if you want i can message you one of my songs
@kristoffer: Actually, after I wrote the song a while back, my band has already started working on it. Thanks for the positive feedback!
@kristoffer: Actually, after I wrote the song a while back, my band has already started working on it. Thanks for the positive feedback!
@kristoffer: Actually, after I wrote the song a while back, my band has already started working on it. Thanks for the positive feedback!
Cool
dude that was friggin amazing now get a drummer a vocalist and a guitarist and some one will buy that
Yeah, That could sound good. I dont recommend posting your lyrics on the internet becuase people will steal them!
Holy s***...
That's f***in' awesome!!!
good job man!!!
I like it, great song!
really good dude
really good dude
really good dude
That's amazing!!!
i like it
good job
I love it.