JUNE 16, 2008 - 12:08 am GMT

ok heres another

will there be pain,
as the razor cuts into my vein,
i guess im not to bright,
to take my life cuz of a fight.

i start slow,
the pain gows,
im bleeding now,
i want to stop but how?

the light starts to fade,
i stop and drop the blade,
the blood flows,
as my life goes.

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re:anavrin

Tue, 06/24/2008 - 20:03 — Love-to-riot

lol thank you and i know what ya mean

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{heaven don't want me and hell won't take me}

I know what we write in our poems doesn't really mean we want that to happen but more as an option or a thought I mean I felt the same way and I have this poem of my death it includes kurt cobain and no one understood what happened or what it was about but I like that about my poems. Only I can understand them. Don't listen to everyone else just me.
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Nirvanahhhhhhhh! Loud and clear