JUNE 17, 2008 - 6:53 pm GMT
if i died,
would you cry,
sit and rub your eyes,
or swat my memory away like a fly?
when im gone will you miss me,
or would i just be like a flea,
something you cant get rid off,
or some thing beautiful like a dove?
why does love hurt,
she's always out with guys that lil flirt,
when it hurts me and i cry,
she tells me to f*** off and die.
i cant leave her alone,
i just wanna go home,
i hate it,
i feel like s***.
but then she makes me feel great,
someone im glad i can date,
then i just wanna die,
but cant and sits and wonders why.

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anarvin
ty. and no....it is about my gf...
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{heaven don't want me and hell won't take me}
forget what they think and listen up
I know it's not about a break up it's about wanting to be with someone and that someone not wanting you the same way or not wanting you at all. I did connect to it except not with a girl but with this one guy I liked who ditched me for this other chick. But you're good at this poem stuff so dude it's awesome
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Nirvanahhhhhhhh! Loud and clear
if u dont mind me asking...
what kind of problems?? u dont have to tell me if u dont want to. . .
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wAiT......wHaT?!
rlly good
ur need to give urself props ur rlly good at these!=)
luv it lots!=)
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♥X♥I LUV YOU JOHN/SCENE KID LUV♥X♥
X♥X HILLARY TANCOON X♥X
awwwww
that wuz good. it connected qwith emotions, and i can connect with it. so, thats really good. it explains alot bout breakups, in my opinion. that wuz really good
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what is today
than yesterday's tomorrow
of our future's past