Something I wrote

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Alone in a strom.
Looking for the way out.
Her touch is so cold.
Her heart so broken.
Your words are sharp.
Your love is poison.
Cant you see your killing her?!
She cries alone.
As another scar is made.
Dont you hear her scream?!
She's dying for you!
Cant you see she's hurt?!
She's standing infront of you!
Can you see her tears falling?!
Say you love her!
Tell her you care!
She's fading away!
Save her!

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Wow. Your so great. Your poems have a lot of pain and emotion in them that make it easier for the reader to relate to them. Your very good.

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My heart's still pouring from my eyes.
Kana

OMG, I LOVE IT. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED, IN MANY WAYS. YOU'VE BEEN A BIG HELP TO! THANX BUCHES! MUCH LOVE<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 XOXO!