APRIL 9, 2008 - 4:16 pm GMT
All the pain kills me and yet am not dead
why cant it all go away please save me
from all the agony that he brought to me
please just take it all away just ended
already please just end everything
am dying so very slowly and yet i
can still breath. I feel my chest no
heartbeat ever since you took my heart
but you never return it back to me.
I trusted you and yet you betray me
please just take it all away am sick
of feeling so empty heartless with all the agony
not spearing my inocent soul that has nothing
else to hope for than your return so please just
take it all away and bring back the real me.
Stop destroying me i cant take it any more.
Just take it all away just take it all away
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thanks
thanks a lot for the comments i never thought that people would actually like them the funny thing is that all of this poems come pouring out of my soul like a running water its beautiful how to express your feelings and have other people admire them so thanks a looooooooooot i really apriciated
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I AM BROKEN ANGEL
SO BROKEN HEARTED
AND FULL OF SWEET
BITTER LOVE =)
That sounds real!
It's not just a good poem; it's simply reality.
--
Johanna
Hey Broken Angel
Hey i like ur 2 poems, i am a poet myself. Thanx 4 addin me to ur buddy list. I see that u are new so welcome to the site ^_^
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Show me what it's like to dream in black and white, So i can leave this world tonight.
Holding on too tight. Breathe the breath of life. So i can leave this world behind!
~Baskettboy34 4ever in the hate of the world~