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i got dumped when i wrote this.

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will i let you go?
after all the answers youve lied, can i forgive?
this mind of mine, wont heal until the sound stops
im not sure i can wait any longer to know im alive

if you hold your head, and turn around will you say
its not giving, and lying to just forget
that im yours, i believe that i will know when i bleed
for one more cry
just spill on forever goodbye

when i fall back up, will you be there to stand?
if i lose my grip, will i lose my life?
im stuck on posessed, with the thought
that youll still be with me
and your kiss wont go

away you fly, i suffer with the lie of your love
screaming and throwing it way just once more
for the last time
close my scars with the truth that i wont cry
to beg for my last time alive

when i fall back up, will you be there to stand?
if i lose my grip, will i lose my life?
im still stuck on posessed, living wiith the lie
that if we can be one
that if we can survive
if we can breathe our light
that this problem cant last to stay
our love and our kiss wont go away
forever goodbye

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your good, i like this!

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Nothin Like A Trail Of Blood To Find Your Way Back Home ~ Nikki Sixx

got my inspiration from a little something i call (getting dumped by the love of your life). pretty common. thanks!

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if this is the last show we play, keep yourselves alive. - Gerard Way-My Chemical Romance-

I haven't heard from you in a while ... whats up?
Oh, btw, i'm really sorry that i'm late on this, but i have read your poem alot, and i love it ..

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dammit (dammit)
give me a beer and i'll slam it
give me a joint and i'll smoke it
if you don't like it then JAM IT
GOD DAMMIT

pretty good poem..i read your other one to they're both reallly great and i must say your a very talented writer

dude, it sucks. no offense, but you can do better... no wonder you got dumped... no just kidding:) but it still sucked

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