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so...here's one of my poems...so ya...enjoy
srry, its kinda lame

You said it was forever, and then you broke my heart,
Now our love’s a never, how did this damn thing start?
I don’t wanna love you, yet I still painfully do,
You left me here to die, how could you?
You made me die inside, I hate you, but I love you,
I feel like I’m drowning, I’m falling, my head is spinning,
I’m calling; I keep calling out to you,
But you can’t hear, you won’t hear, don’t hear me, oh why won’t you hear me,
I’m living in a world so cold and always the last to know,
Why me, I have always been told,
I always hear that it’s never too late, but when does that start.
It feels like the end, why did you let this die, I was willing to do anything for you,
But you forsook me and left me here to die,
I’m lying on the floor in my time of dying, bleeding crimson pain,
So much agony from you yet I can’t stop loving you.

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Thats REALLY Good....I Love It =)

Hi I'm Ambeleigh.
I just wanna say your poem is amazing.
It really and honestly is.
I really like how you incorporate Three Days Grace song title in the poem.
It's really good.Smiling

NOT BAD LIKE SHE SIAD GOOD LYRICS POEM

wow that's an amzing poem
ur really good maybe you can write 1 for me lol
by the way names karl