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THE ONE I LOST

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she is the scars on my wrist
our romantic story with a f***ed up twist
i never thought she'd leave me like this
here i bleed on the floor
living without bliss

prechorus:
you left-not me
you broke me
now i want you to see

CHORUS:
how can you not see
exactly what you've done to me
leaving me bleeding
leaving me seething
with scars on my wrist

she is my sky falling down
my world crumbling around
i really thought we had found
just what we were looking for
but she left without a sound

[prechorus]
CHORUS

breakdown bridgeish thingy lol:

bleeding and crying
seething and dieing
cuts to the bone
left alone
so lost so lost...

chorus

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Sorry, this is gonna be a really quick critique...

I for sure like the song as a whole. Nice imagery. My issue is the pre-chorus/chorus. The last line is "now i want you to see" and goes into "how can you not see" I think you should choose between the first line of the chorus and the last line of the pre-chorus. Too repetitive for me.