I reeeeeeeally really really really like this one!!! Ummm, let's see...i like the emotion and meaning of the song. In the second verse, I feel like you should say "look into the eyes" instead of "see." And the line after that seems awkward to me. I'm not sure quite what it is... Can't pinpoint it. I like the play on words at the end of that verse. I like that A LOT. reeeeeeeeally good. =) songs like this are my favorites of yours. idk what it is, i just feel the inspiration a hell of a lot more.
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Re: twilight rain ( this and "understand" are interrelated. if you read the bridge to understand it talks about the savior)
I reeeeeeeally really really really like this one!!! Ummm, let's see...i like the emotion and meaning of the song. In the second verse, I feel like you should say "look into the eyes" instead of "see." And the line after that seems awkward to me. I'm not sure quite what it is... Can't pinpoint it. I like the play on words at the end of that verse. I like that A LOT. reeeeeeeeally good. =) songs like this are my favorites of yours. idk what it is, i just feel the inspiration a hell of a lot more.