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new song by dmonheart
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Montag, Januar 9, 2012 - 18:26
new song by dmonheart
ok, so a couple people said they wanted me to post another song, so I wrote one... this one's about that one person that you hate with all your heart yet somehow you can't let them go cause you miss the pain.
My eyes went wide
When I saw you
For the first time
the stupid voice in my head
Started up again
Thought it ended
Cause my soul still hasn’t mended
Choruse:
But if I see you again
After you got into my head
After everything you said
I swear, blood will be shed
Manipulated me
Abused my love
Yet I came back after
every push and shove
anger pulses through me
wanting to make you bleed
you’ve changed me
now I’m falling
can’t find myself
now I’m crawling
I can’t hold on
I wish you were gone
Night after night
I think about you
And how I can’t fight
Yet somehow I still love you
I don’t know how I do
You make me feel good inside
Yet you always make me cry
Chorus
Why am I in tears
Now That you’re finally gone
Why am I in fear
How can I miss the sweet pain
that drove me insane
you’re all that’s on my mind
and without you I’m feelin blind
When I see you again
Cause you’ve never left my head
I remember everything you said
That caused my tears to shed
Always
Made me run
Yet maybe I’ll come back
After everything you’ve done
Agony pulses through me
wanting to be free
you pick me up
when I’m falling
you kick me
when I’m crawling
I can’t hold on
Now that you’re gone
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lol
LOL...I am a writer...I tend to do that....my friends seem to be afraid when I describe my revenge plan....it tends to be a bit more graphic each time.
what vivid imagery you just created in my head
Well yeah. Oboes are hard to play,but they still always sound like you are blowing your nose....
lol ;-P
VERY SUCKY! XD
Haha but now that we finally would be able to form a band im fricken moving!!!!! HOW SUCKY IS THAT!?!?!?!
LOL
Great song! It is taking me a while to write mine,'cause I can't sing,so I might like,play guitar to it or something. My oboe wouldn't be ideal. LOL.
the next generation of apocalyptica has arrived!
Lol maybe a great orchestra.
Which, probably, I would listen to. Orchestra is pretty cool...when you're in the mood. xD
ya, right.... that would so make an amazing rock band XD
Lol me and my BFFs almost formed a band but me and one of em got into fight about who would sing.....i won but then she got mad so we didnt do it idk how great it would sound though it would be... vocals, trombone, piano, violin, clarinet haha
Lol me and my BFFs almost formed a band but me and one of em got into fight about who would sing.....i won but then she got mad so we didnt do it idk how great it would sound though it would be... vocals, trombone, piano, violin, clarinet haha
ur welcome
Yeah...just tad too far. xD But...I do like writing songs.
Idk. And thanks Dmonheart! I love writing! 
But I could never sing it. I got my acoustic guitar to do that for me. <3 
A band would be awesome but yeah I live really far away haha XP
A band would be awesome but yeah I live really far away haha XP
thx I'm sure ur great at drums already skyla...
I'd ask u guys to form a band with me, but we kinda live at opposite ends of the country so........
awesome
I would love to play drumset in a band, I just need to get better at it haha. And yes sweet pain is awesome!!
I would love to play drumset in a band, I just need to get better at it haha. And yes sweet pain is awesome!!
thanks... I'm sure u'd be good as lead guitarist and back vocals.
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(really? guitarist? for someone who plays guitar instead of singing ur a really good song writer!
Dmonheart...I do have a secret dream to be in a band too...only to be the lead guitarist and the back-up screamo/vocals.
I'm sure you're an angel at the vocals. 
And don't be so modest.
thanks guys... i was thinkin sweet pain too. loveisguitars, i want to join a band soooo badly but I don't have any band members and I have no musical experience other than singing (well, I guess I could sing. I'm pretty good, but not amazing...
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I like this song. It's very relatable.
And I like Sweet Pain. Because if you name it Wish You Were Gone it might remind people of Since You've Been Gone. Which is a good song, but your song it totally different. It's better, and it's rougher then that other one. Your's, I really hope you form a band someday. I wanna hear your stuff, not just read it! 
I like sweet pain the song is rly cool
I havent named it yet, but I'm thinking about either calling it sweet pain or wish you were gone... don't know what do you guys think
Thnx
LOVE IT!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!