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on understandMo, 12/07/2009 - 19:17 — desertrose
I like the meaning of the song. I think think the second verse could be manipulated a little more cuz it's a little wordy, but it really doesn't matter cuz that's just a personal thing. =)
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Mo, 12/07/2009 - 19:15 — desertrose
Sorry, this is gonna be a really quick critique...
I for sure like the song as a whole. Nice imagery. My issue is the pre-chorus/chorus. The last line is "now i want you to see" and goes into "how can you not see" I think you should choose between the first line of the chorus and the last line of the pre-chorus. Too repetitive for me.
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Re: twilight rain ( this and "understand" are interrelated. if you read the bridge to understand it talks about the savior)
I reeeeeeeally really really really like this one!!! Ummm, let's see...i like the emotion and meaning of the song. In the second verse, I feel like you should say "look into the eyes" instead of "see." And the line after that seems awkward to me. I'm not sure quite what it is... Can't pinpoint it. I like the play on words at the end of that verse. I like that A LOT. reeeeeeeeally good. =) songs like this are my favorites of yours. idk what it is, i just feel the inspiration a hell of a lot more.