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"War Inside"

I fight belligerently
battling anger and hatred
The darkness consumes my thoughts
I fall to my knees and bow my head to my formidable enemy...
myself

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me

i was pretty much talking about myself. thanks for the comments ppl!!!

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i feel guilty for feeling numb

i think that that poem was awsome. i love it. You obviously have that writers thoughts, were you talking bout yourself or just somthing that you came up wit? Never the less i liked it! Get on soon. i gots somthing to tell you.

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I am not numb just unfeeling, i am not afraid just not ready, i am not kind, just not cruel, and above all i am not weak!! But i am cold.

wow

its was like you were talking about me, i can relate to that poem so well that poem talks about my everyday life

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Ava