DECEMBER 21, 2007 - 9:57 am GMT
Dodging every bullet
and spitting every line
until nothing's left but hopeless time
Run fast...before it's too late
Before nothing's left but time and hate
Unless something's done to ease the cry...
all that's left is the time to die
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wow
you have an amazing way with words! this is gorgeous!
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"Why love if losing hurts so much? We love to know that we are not alone."
--C.S. Lewis
mhm
i think you are a very good writer...don't doubt yourself. and i dont' think it's odd that you write poems after someone else does...i can see why you would. and sorry i haven't been on lately. i usually only come on at school cuz i can't at home (although sometimes i do)...so yea see you around.
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i feel guilty for feeling numb
and sorry
i have this thing that i do. if somone writes a poem i just have to write one back to show somthing. . . it's complicated so complicated that i don't even know y i do it. ill keep writing and you should too cuz your alot better than i am. i just say the same thing over and over again so i even get bored! SHEESH! anyways i loved yours and hope that you look at my pro. and just keep me on my toes so i don't get that bored again(I had NOTHING to do over the holidays). See U round.
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I am not numb just unfeeling, i am not afraid just not ready, i am not kind, just not cruel, and above all i am not weak!! But i am cold.
thanx and...
i am listening to that song by hurt and that is pretty cool! I understand what it means kinda just let me search the web and ill probly love them as much as i think you do.
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I am not numb just unfeeling, i am not afraid just not ready, i am not kind, just not cruel, and above all i am not weak!! But i am cold.
wow
that was VERY GOOD! i'm glad i'm not the only one w/ the "writers touch"
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i feel guilty for feeling numb
Okay
Love is lost and war is gone
hope is exiled and belive is running fast away
shallow and misguided is the life i now live
but i don't wear my heart on thine sleeve
I cannot jump at a cry, i cannot flinch at a sowrd
you cannot scream in pain, you cannot feel anything
but what we have in commen is the fact that we bolth hurt and are being tortured by the only person that can bring us down.
So hold your head up high and stay vigulet for the time of choice is to come again.
We are the only ones that can stop this hell
So come with me and then only can you hold glory.
idk i just made that up on the spot. WTH! (H= hell)
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I am not numb just unfeeling, i am not afraid just not ready, i am not kind, just not cruel, and above all i am not weak!! But i am cold.